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Post by commander on Aug 1, 2011 1:31:54 GMT
Name: Name is unknown. Known to his soldiers simply as "Commander"
Physical Characteristics:
Height: 5' 11"
Age: Unknown
Weight: 140-160 lbs. but no one is sure
Body Build: Very fit and agile
Hair Color: Unknown
Eye Color: Unknown
Skin Color: Unknown
General Information:
Planet of Origin: Unknown
History: Not much is know about the Commander except that he has become one of the APM's top commanders. No one knows where he came from or when he joined the APM, but he brings results and that's all the APM cares about.
Allegiance: Apothos Private Military (Evil)
Equipment:
Weaponry type: Arcian weaponry
Class: Close Quarters/Officer
Primary Weapon: Katana
Secondary Weapon: Magnum .46
Side arm: Bowie Knife
Other Equipment: Throwing knives
Armor: Heavy
Personal Information:
Age: 13+
Sample writing: First post in book two can count
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Post by Lucius Alar on Aug 1, 2011 21:07:23 GMT
Ok, well this is an interesting character. You will have to expand on the story. I am going to approve you; however, I would like to see your sample writing (first post) quite soon thanks. I am also a little worried that your primary weapon is a katana. I would hope that if you got into a fight with another character, there would be no bullet blocking or slicing with the katana (that would be a bit god-mode-ish).
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Post by commander on Aug 2, 2011 1:34:44 GMT
Yeah can my sample writing be my first post of book 2? And yeah no bullet deflection and stuff. Just pure agility and smarts
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Post by Lucius Alar on Aug 2, 2011 2:09:06 GMT
Your sample writing can be in your first post in book 2; I just kinda want to it be posted soon so that any other potential members won't think you can just skip the sample writing.
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